3 comments on “Imbalance

  1. There’s something so alarming about the word “fester”. I can never put my finger on it, but there’s deep-seeded malice in that word. I think this is my favourite poem of yours—absolutely love it for the darkness and the use of alliteration and repetition (pray, prey).


  2. “It itches, it seethes, it festers, it breathes
    Burrowing deeper into the sorrow
    In the starkness, I bleed darkness
    No hope horizons on the morrow”

    Damn….. I feel that….

    POWERFUL ending….

    Yeah we need to get out of our anger and get back to flirting 😉 LOL what say u? LOL *hugs*

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