.
.
You like that don’t you?
It wasn’t a question.
The scent of them
Permeates the air.
Their ragged breaths
Ripping
The silence.
Her hot naked back
Shoved
Onto the cool rough wall.
Tasting her
Wetness
On his lips.
Eyes wide open
In the stark pitch black.
She answers anyway.
Yes sir, please!
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Raivenne-lations 
Oh my. There’s a good start to my Sunday morning!
Whaaaaat? * bats lashes innocently *
Thanks GG. 😉
oh my is right, you are Amazingly talented at creating word images
Why thank you, HI.
Beautifully vivid and sensual, Raivenne! Nice!
Glad you enjoyed Charles. Thanks.
I gave this imagism a try. What do you think?
I was not anticipating that! lol But it wasn’t unwelcome, either. ;op
Surprise! * Big smile *
Thanks Cerridwen.
great read.
Thanks Snowflakes.
oh goodness yes…i like that… off to cool down a bit…smiles
* turns on hose *
Thanks Claudia
Whew…this evokes much more than just images… great piece!
http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/the-rubber-band/
* swings hose from Claudia to Laurie *
Thanks Laurie!
LOL, when u started it “it wasn’t a question” i was immediately thinking about the answer, and you supplied that, well, in a poetic sense you did.
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks.
That was fantastic…and certainly sensory! (said the Big White Woman) 🙂 You were definitely able to stir up some images within my imagination! And, if your’re interested in knowing more about me…and you know you are…you can check out mine http://www.tashtoo.com/2012/01/meeting-bar-open.html
* truly laughing out loud *
Glad to know some folks actually do read that mini-bio thing.
Thanks for comment (and the giggles).
The tactile, sensory package in one. Yet we do see them, don’t we? Almost from the inside out.
Well done.
“Yet we do see them, don’t we?” Yes, in the oddest way we really do.
Thank you!
Really nice job here. The poem sandwiched in between the question and the answer is perfect. Well done. Thanks
Thank you.
well i need to go take a shower now…good answer…ha…and love what comes in between…hot write…
* giggles * Thanks Brian.
Brilliant…!
Thank you!
Now that’s an image I understand! Very sensuous.
Am I going to have to turn on the hose again?
Thanks Charles.
More of the same might be in order here.
Is that an order? 😉
Thanks David.
Delicious involvement of the senses, Raivenne. Thanks for sharing this one.
Thank you and you’re welcome.
What a great intro:
“You like that don’t you?
It wasn’t a question.”
Yeah, I have to admit I grinned when it came to me. Thanks Shawna.
Sensual and humorous… Perfect mixture!
Humorous? Okaaay…
Thanks, Magher1
Wow – that’s pretty hot. I think that’s a question everyone’s been asked “You like that don’t you”? teehee. Great work, loved this poem – thanks for sharing!
Here’s mine for the rally: http://cursemymetalbody.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/poetry-thursday-74/
Yep, that is a popular question and almost always the person inquiring already knows the answer 😉
Thanks Cherlyn
I’m shivering….. damn …. you made me hot and amorous in one go…..
This poem was written SO WELL… the picture was vivid, the emotions and sensuality on point…
*breathing hard*
I love it…..
“I’m shivering”
” *breathing hard* ”
You like that don’t don’t you? 😉
Thanks Bajan
You know the answer…. 😉 LOL