22 comments on “No Means To Measure

  1. I love the use of colour, Raivenne, and the play on ‘rise up in slate’ and the ‘colors of mourning’, and the super tanka form works well..

  2. Exquisite! The super-Tanka does, indeed, produce a triple-poem experience. Your skillful pairing of imagery and photo evoke a mood of mournful apathy. Wonderfully written!

  3. Adding this form to ones to try. You have skillfully created two complementary tanka that soar in the combined third. So sorrowful to read 😦

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