Ya needs you sumting fo’ dems chills
Yous lookin’ likes ya needs sum care
I’s jus’ da ting ta cures ya ills
Lemme put summa dis dere
Dis’ll warm ya likes a sweatta
Feelin’ real good to you, yah?
Imma makes it all betta
Jus’ open wide and say ah
When yous sick ain’t nuttin like Mama’s luv
Wid sum chikin soup and Vick’s vapa rub
So today on Real Toads, we are asked to feel free to write a poem containing some kind of local vernacular, slang, or pronunciation. My poor, poor spell check!
National Poetry Month – Day 19
We we cure what ails you with the Ravenfly.
The Ravenfly is a nonce form that consists of two quatrains and a couplet
with syllable count of of 8/7/8/7/10/10. The rhyming scheme is abab cdcd ee
There are no metric requirements.
Gotta love that capo tub. And this poem.
Vick’s vapa rub…. that was my grandmother’s go to cure also.
Yes– that sounds pretty good to me, right now. Thanks, Raivenne. k.
Chicken soup and vicks vapor rub… sounds good to me 😀
feels like an rhcp song… delightfull
Love these rhymes.