This is how you want me?
Twisting myself
Inside out?
Just for you.
Dropped into the vortex
All these parts of me
Churning,
Tearing apart!
For you!
My death
Custom made
Sustenance
For your desire
Of the sweetest kind
I hope you get
Brainfreeze!
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My milkshake brings all the boys and girls to the shoppe, I guess.
Today, Brendan at Real Toads challenges to write a poem with poetic surprise. I suspect something a little more highbrow was on the plate, but the ol’ muse ain’t biting any of it.
Real Toads | Turns of the Tale: Poetic Surprise
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Meanwhile, in a serendipitous turn, Grace at dVerse inspires us to write a Quadrille with a Twist. Twist being the word for the day, to be included in the write, in any of its usages.
dVerse ~ Poets Pub | Quadrille #7
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National Poetry Writing Month – Day 18
In lovely coincidence I happen to be up to the letter Q as I tiptoe through my alphabetical tulips of poetic forms – so today I do a dance of a Quadrille. A short poem of exactly 44 words, not including the title – no more, no less.
Raivenne-lations 
Ha.. yes I chuckled at the possibility of double prompting here… your last two lines made me chuckle even more..
luv the “in your face mood” this sure is a rant
have a good week
much love…
I love when one poem fits dual prompts! Nice work.
Ha! That ending, and your milkshake comment, cracked me up, Raivenne! 😉
I’m glad the muse took you where she did. Fun read.
Ha! My first thoughts went “left” with the brain freeze… cool
I want to say, “You go girl!” and the end of this read! Great take on the prompt!
ooops….I want to say “You go girl!” at the end of this read 🙂
Wow hitting two prompts in one post 🙂 Love the spunky attitude & ending of the brainfreeze ~
Ha, great ending! A nice twist in itself.
Great poem and nice ending.
Enjoyed this a lot, I am tempted to say “you go girl” but it shows my age 🙂 Very well done.
Love it. No one needs to turn themselves into a knot…go with brain freeze
“My death
Custom made”
I love that.
This made me smile. Cool!
lol…love it, specially the end 😉
Bam! That’s telling him. Love it.
Love the ending to this and how you managed the two prompts…well done! 🙂
A feminist take on the prompt(s). Love it!
So there!! Always love a feisty little rant. 🙂
That last line changed the entire meaning of this poem. Brilliant!
Dark, funny and cute-just my style!