28 comments on “My Than-ks Bauk To You

  1. This made me smile big time and there’s clearly a reason you hosted, you are awesome at this form! Thank you for your excellent introduction and patience as we all tried something new. It was a lot of fun (despite the grumbling :)).

  2. Oh you clever poet, you. Loved this and we all had such a good time with this new form. I think with a bit more work I could make this work in lots of new work. There is a modern feel to it, a subtlety with the rhyme and a great symmetry that can be achieved through it. There were so many good ones that linked!

    Hope you got to read the comments. So many had such good things to say to you about the form! Thank you again.

    • “Oh you clever poet, you” I tries -blush-.

      It is a tough form, but one that is so rewarding when done right. Thanks again for letting me host FormForAll.

  3. smiles…thank you for defintiely challenging us and make us think in new ways and stretch those cognitive muscles….this was much fun…thank you much for doing it…smiles..

  4. first, thank you for the introduction to this new form.

    second, a perverse form indeed; it is definitely a challenge given the tigh constraints of the verse.

  5. And thanks to YOU for this nice poem and for introducing us to the form. I think it would be easier to accomplish next time, and I did enjoy the process.

  6. neat choice of theme here for your post. Your example here easily and effortlessly shows how this form lends itself to all thematic/stylistic choices and how neat and fun are at one with the Than Bauk. Great fun this prompt was.

    • how neat and fun
      are at one with
      Great fun this prompt

      Now look at that! Remove a word here, twist a word there and you almost had a Than Bauk as your comment * grin *
      Thanks Fred.

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