5 comments on “Summer in the City

  1. Skin feels like jelly oozing through my seam…yikes, great description….def feel the heat in this one…and want to go join the kids in the mist whether the boss likes it or not….

  2. I see you’re not afraid to use rhythm that thumps like a heartbeat and a rhyme scheme that kicks the backside of each line. Much appreciated.

    M
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    Marie Marshall
    author/poet/editor
    Scotland

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