Cloth girds his eyes in loose blindfold
He lays there and conforms as told
To move now would court disaster
He’s in the hand of the master
A maze is stroked across his skin
He holds the urge to gasp within
Warm oils offer scents of aster
He’s in the hand of the master
He seams the pleasure with the pain
The odd brew comfort it contains
One moment slow, the next faster
He’s in the hand of the master
Bordered on pleasure’s dive he moans
And lets escape a fizzled groan
Flesh yields like sinner to pastor
He’s in the hand of the master
A subtle tap sends the message
His hour’s up for this massage
His twinkled grin is now plastered
He’s in the hand of the master
Sore muscles tamed by fingers meek
Sets his appointment for next week
A magic touch like spell casters
He’s in the hand of the master
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And today’s form? Kyrielle
The French kyrielle is composed entirely of quatrains (a quatrain is any stanza with four lines). There is no set number of stanzas, although generally a kyrielle contains three or more. The rhyme scheme is up to the poet (aabb ccbb ddbb etc. is frequently used), but it must be the same for all stanzas. Also, the last line of all stanzas is the same. Kyrielles generally have eight syllables per line, although this is not a requirement.
Other rhyme schemes for the quatrain could be abaB, cbcB, dbdB, etc… or abbA, accA, addA, etc.. As long as the each quatrain uses the same rhyme scheme, the choice is yours.
I feel much better now! Excellent write, Raivenne! Soothing, and leaves me with a smile on my sill old mug.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/15/the-muted-movie-plays/
Thanks Charles!
ok, i could def do with a massage after that…Flesh yields like sinner to pastor
…i am ready to make a full confession…haha…back in the day well before i was married i dated a masseuse…
“full confession” Hahaha, Thanks Brian.
Excellent exploration of the kyrielle. The religious references raise the physical experience to a spiritual one. Well writ!
Thank you Gay.