32 comments on “Forgive Me

    • Sorry, just your generic “he messed up, she kicked him to the curb and now he wants back in”. Though now that you’ve said it, I can kind of see how that line of thought would work. I like it.

  1. I like the longer lines when one wants to say much more…it is still a
    rondeau and is effective here in getting more particulars across to the reader……well done on forgiveness, a complicated subject.

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