I did not want that I should fall in love
For it seemed Fate had better plans for me
It was a bother not mine to speak of
I did not think I could fall in a love
Hard as the bedrock yet soft as a glove
That such love could be returned you see
But now I know I have fallen in love
For it seemed Fate had better plans for me
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Today on dVerse Poet’s Pub Frank challenges to write a triolet or a poem that closely resembles a triolet.
So, what is a triolet? A triolet’s characteristics are the following.
- The poem has 8 lines.
- The rhyme scheme is abaaabab.
- The meter is iambic tetrameter.
- The first, fourth and seventh lines repeat.
- The second and eighth lines repeat.
I like how falling in love turned out to be fate’s better plan than what one thought fate had in store for one.
Thank you Frank!
Nicely composed triolet, with a happy ending, yay!
Had to end the month of love on a happy note. Thanks!
You’re welcome.
I like the way the repeated lines shift in meaning.
Thank you, Sarah.
A bang on, sterling triolet; my favorite so far today. The refrain alterations are smooth, and it cleaves to the happy message very well. Love poems can be saccharine, but yours is heart warming.
Why thank you, Glenn.
Fate’s plan is seldom what we want. Nice poem.
So true, Mary. Thanks.
I like the progression in your triolet, Raivenne, which is a difficult feat in a short poem, the way it begins on a wistful note and ends so hopefully. I particularly like the way it turns on the lines:
‘Hard as the bedrock yet soft as a glove
That such love could be returned you see’.
Thank you, Kim.
I tend to write more about my loss than my present gains. This was very inspiring to keep it positive.
Thank you, it was work to turn it around.
I like how you managed to change the meaning of the repeated lines in that last repeat.
Thanks, Jane.
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very clever and delightful triolet … well done!
Thank you, Kate.
my pleasure … I made a second attempt 🙂
Hard as the bedrock yet soft as a glove …. how apt
love how you managed to close it so merrily
Thanks Björn! Getting it to end on a good note with such a short form was work.