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Your Tears

Posted on February 11, 2019 by Raivenne

Your tears
Glistened
Shone like diamonds
That streamed your face
In silver lines
They were balm
Elixir
Hot and heavy
Salty and yet so wet
Just like you
An ambrosia of
Your pain
And your arousal
Tasted
In a kiss yielded
From your lips

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Tonight at dVerse Dee (whimsygizmo) asks us to kiss off a quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words, not including the title, and use some form of the word kiss.

 dVerse ~Poets Pub | Quadrille #73

22 thoughts on “Your Tears”

rivrvlogr on February 11, 2019 at 4:34 PM said:

A kiss to take one’s breath away!

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- Raivenne on February 11, 2019 at 8:27 PM said:
  
  That it is. Thanks.
  
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whimsygizmo on February 11, 2019 at 4:40 PM said:

Oh, I can see those tears. Wonderful, Raivenne.

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- Raivenne on February 11, 2019 at 8:27 PM said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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Glenn Buttkus on February 11, 2019 at 5:34 PM said:

You know, as a youngster, I often wept during and after sex, out of sheer gratitude.

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- Raivenne on February 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM said:
  
  True gratitude is powerful. Thanks.
  
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msjadeli on February 11, 2019 at 6:29 PM said:

sensory saturation. not easy to capture ❤

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- Raivenne on February 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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  - msjadeli on February 11, 2019 at 9:24 PM said:
    
    You are welcome!
kim881 on February 12, 2019 at 3:28 AM said:

Kisses and tears, both balm and elixir, pleasure and pain, beautifully conveyed in your quadrille.

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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:14 PM said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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sanaarizvi on February 12, 2019 at 6:59 AM said:

Wonderfully sensual! ❤️❤️

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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:15 PM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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lillian on February 12, 2019 at 8:40 AM said:

Elixir indeed.
It must be just my laptop computer because no one else has mentioned it….but on my laptop screen, the dVerse square/logo covers up the first words of the last nine lines 😦 I’m going to click on it and see if I can move it or get rid of it….I would really love to read all the words.

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- lillian on February 12, 2019 at 8:41 AM said:
  
  Nope….I can’t move it. It looks like a Pinterest?
  
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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:16 PM said:
  
  Thanks Lillian. I have no idea why it looked so off for you. I’ve reformatted it. I hope this works better.
  
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robtkistner on February 12, 2019 at 1:45 PM said:

Oh yes, breathtaking and memorable Raivenne!

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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:16 PM said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on February 12, 2019 at 2:42 PM said:

This is a wonderful kiss… sounds like a soothing gift

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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:17 PM said:
  
  Thanks Björn.
  
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Frank Hubeny on February 12, 2019 at 9:15 PM said:

I liked your description of tears as silver lines.

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- Raivenne on February 12, 2019 at 9:17 PM said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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