In the dark
That is what you said
As you walked towards me slowly
It was the perfect kind of night for new beginnings
As I lift my face
That it was among
Things that you
As you stepped to me
With a kiss and then walked away
That right then with the witness of Luna in the night
You could not begin to admit
That shine in my eyes
Was just the
National Poetry Writing Month 2017 – Day 6
Write a poem that looks at the same thing from various points of view
The Daily Post | Daily Prompt – Denial
So very sad. So very well written.
Beautiful. Love the spacing and shape like a stream of tears….
Simple. Well spoken. Beautiful!
Oh…a heart-breaker this. Great writing.
Oh this is soo stirring… ❤️
The closing totally changed the views… really well done.
Diverse point of view, well presented … and in intriguing form as well.