She knows not when her time will end
Tomorrow or when all Earth rends?
Or just until Time’s hands align
But until then I’ll call her mine
She lives, she loves, in unknown span
I oft forget she’s not human
What makes her whole she redefines
But until then I’ll call her mine
Should she die first I’ll feel the pain
And I’ll be lost like tears in rain
She may go first by cruel design
But until then I’ll call her mine
She knows not when her time will end
But until then I’ll call her mine
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Written for today’s
Real Toads Prompt for Today: Monday – Soviet Kitsch Where we’re invited to write a poem based on a sci-fi movie poster. We were given a choice of amazing posters from classic Sci-Fi movies in the soviet union as inspiration, or to choose a different poster found online. It’s not as classic as the Soviet kitsch posters, but my muse stopped searching the moment it saw:
And because this is
National Poetry Writing Month 2016 – Day 11
Today’s poetic form: Kyrielle Sonnet
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain, usually but not always appearing as the last line of each stanza. Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:
AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
Oh what a perfectly executed sonnet… love the repeated lines and how it ties to Bladerunner… or Do androids dream of electric sheep?… way cool
Such a well crafted sonnet,,you are very talented, who knows who one will love?
second the above comment – very talented and touching
Oh, I agree. Really well done.
Really lovely!
Beautiful sonnet
Love this sweet sonnet.
A Blade Runner sonnet, very well done! Thanks for posting this to the out of standard!
A beautiful response to the prompt, and I loved the Blade Runner reference.
Adore Blade Runner – I’ve seen it several times. This beautiful sonnet could be a prologue for the movie.
Such a melodic ring to this…beautiful.