First day of spring–
I keep thinking about
The end of autumn.
Matsuo Basho – First day of spring
Lo, how she trembled that first day
Flowers grew where she tread
To quickly die as she walked away
An incongruous sight for the dead
Even Charon was saddened to bring
To the damned, such a beautiful thing
Nor did she bother pretending to resist
When her first earthly return, Demeter insists
For above the living do sing
First day of spring
Years pass and a rapport twixt us grew
I had a golden circlet woven for her as balm
A token of my love as our time to part was due
Adorned with flames and a pomegranate charm
She laughs and I thought I felt love sprout
Yet she left it on our bed with a pout
A hope had glimmered
But her eyes shimmered
It is in the doubt
I keep thinking about
The underworld was hell anew in her wake
Yet the surprise was mine upon her return
To learn her leaving it was not mistake
But to remind me that her love in turn does burn
Now laden with eternities under the sun
From first bud to last leaf it compares to none
For she now returns without regret
To lay claim to me, her love, and the bracelet
Aye, my love, my life always comes
The end of autumn
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Today at Real Toads, Susie prompts us with “bracelet” as inspiration. Basho’s classic haiku brings to mind Hades longing for Persephone.
National Poetry Writing Month 2016 – Day 7
Today as I continue through the alphabet of poetry forms this month I reach the letter G, and my favorite poetry form, the Glosa.
I love how you cause the tale to unfold gracefully.
This is absolutely magical…!!!
You’ve given this story vibrancy with your words.
I love the classic feel of this.
This poem gave me lots of pleasure to read, whimsical with a promise of lasting love,
Love as it should be… like a rose with just a few thorns.
I love the third stanza.
What a mystical/magical story of love. Beautiful use of language. Thanks so much for writing and sharing in the garden!
You’ve really made the myth your own. Thanks. K.
Oh, so god to get Hades’ point of view at last\, and find out it really was a love story.
I do love the retelling of this tale ~