She hears someone
ask a question,
but ignores it
only having eyes for the man
lying before her
Fingers
once plump with life’s bounty
are now long and slender
the joints so pronounced
In her hands his grasp
is now a far paler shadow
of the bone-crushing grip they once bore
The last vestige of thicker memories
his hair, in its continued unruliness,
belies its current state of thinness
as she gently pushes it back from his brow
Just as she used to do
in much younger days
Like his fingers,
his once round face
has been redrawn
into an austere beauty
She ignores the breathing tube
resting against the now sharp lines
of cheekbones and jawline
She looks up at the nurse
finally hearing his question
Yes, she nods slowly, she will be okay,
eventually
Then with a violent shake of her head
belies that
and feels her husband’s arms
quickly surround her
when the tears flow
as she looks back once more
at their son
The pain gone, his eyes
are amazingly clear
as they no longer stare back
into her red rimmed ones
until she reaches up
and gently closes them
Forever
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It’s Open Link Night | Week 145here at dVerse ~Poets Pub. My now three day old mood has clearly affected my muse as well. I’m out of town for the weekend, hopefully a different scene makes a better attitude.
What a heartbreaking end.. I felt like an intruder sharing a view that should have been private..
So beautiful feelings facing this harsh world, such decisions, ends…
this a strong use of a poem to tell a story, very well said.
Vivid description, genuine emotion… powerful poetry.
This is powerful.
Sometimes you just have to know when it’s time to step away from writing. May I suggest checking out this post from a fellow Slicer if you’re still in a must-affecting mood: https://kkoehlerblog.wordpress.com/2015/03/28/find-your-happy/. I wrote one of my own poems like this after reading Kim’s post.