7 comments on “A Dream Remembered

  1. But this dream was meant to be, once I gazed upon your face
    A gentle whiff of homeland, in this god-forsaken place

    nice…cool to find that one, only now to woo them surely…there is a really enchanting rhythm to this piece…you work the rhyme well and it makes for nice story telling too…i like your setting as well…

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