14 comments on “For While She Weeps

  1. whew….wicked rhythm in this…and so true ont he snake it becomes winding its way in….and taking root…but pain ends (hopefully) and we can once more be free…

  2. Love this. Also would love to have you host an article on the form in the future for FormForAll. Would you be interested? Let me know – gaycannon@yahoo.com. Plenty of time to decide but it’s an interesting new form to me and I love how it feels so internal and external with the rhyme scheme turning throughout. Very musical!

  3. Wow..I love this form…yet another one that I’m unfamiliar with…but like the tight rhyme scheme internally placed. Yes, pain usually does subside so we can once again be free from its all-encompassing clutches.

    • I enjoy trying new forms, especially short ones like this that go against the grain of my verbose nature.

      Glad you enjoyed the form and the write, Bodhirose – thanks.

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