9 comments on “the fall

  1. I have to tell you something–and this is not the first time it’s occurred with one of your poems; I was on the last few lines before I noticed it rhymed. I consider that a good thing, because I was so engrossed in the story, and it was written so well, the rhyming was a secondary thing.
    Awesome, Raivenne!

  2. I totally agree with Charles…I didn’t notice the rhyming either…until I saw his comment for you…wow..I was so caught up in that tragic story. Close to home too…I saw my Dad struggle with alcoholism all during my growing up…was not pretty. A very accurate piece of the life of an alcoholic…and well done too.

    And so appreciate your honoring me with your nomination…thank you very much. xoxo

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