9 comments on “Just Say Good-bye

  1. wow…dark verse….dying to meet you at an all new level…smiles…i like the metallica verse as well…they are a fav from back in the day….the last two lines of this are surely zingers….

  2. Where did THAT come from? This is a stunning write, Raivenne; so vivid in scene and thought, it is like watching a scene from a play. Beautiful writing, even on such a dark subject. Then again, I see through the darkness, which I think may be your intent! In any case, I am impressed with this poem!

  3. Beautiful, if certainly disquieting. There have been many times when I’ve wished I could believe in an afterlife, especially one better than this life.

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