From the cerulean
And ocher vales
In violet frenzy
To the depths
Of night’s indigo
The vast emptiness
Of what was
Finding it fitting
As deeply plunged
dVerse Poets Pub | Meeting the Bar – Impressionistic Writing
oh i love that you really used colors to paint your poem…azure…crimson..violet…indigo…then the emptiness.. lots of emotions in these lines…
When I saw the title, I thought, “At least she didn’t use cerulean.” Then, BAM, there it was in the first line! Just messin with ya!. It’s a beautiful poem, and I love how you painted a picture with colorful words!
You – go sit in a corner and behave! :p
ooohhh… ah’ight den
Interesting that “the vast emptiness” has no color at all.
Done on purpose. After all what’s the color of absolutely nothing?
smiles..a wonderful use of color in this and they play so well to set the tone of the emotions in it…def felt the emptiness…nicely done…
Thank you Brian.
You paint me a vivid picture with your words. So surreal and captivating. I just want to jump in. Well done. 🙂
Jump into the emptiness? Just teasing!
Thank you Rigel.
Thanks Mama Zen.