I fear a love which fills my heart is slowly draining away
But taking the next step is one that hurts far too much
Now I have given up in believing in dreams that come true
When the secrets known to capture time are beyond my grasp
I am so afraid that someday there won’t be anything
That his caress will not be even a distant memory
Let alone the minutiae details of just our daily living
I fear a love which fills my heart is slowly draining away
I dared to dream I’d remember every aspect for all time
But what hold have I a mere mortal against all eternity?
I know this slow erasure is part of the steps in moving on
But taking the next step is one that hurts far too much
I need his kindred touch to remain locked deep inside me
Always a part of my soul as I believed with each breath
When our every want and dream seemed just a day away
Now I have given up in believing in dreams that come true
Yes, I need his kindred touch to remain locked deep inside me
For I dared to dream I’d remember every aspect for all time
Now I am so afraid that someday there won’t be anything
When the secrets known to capture time are beyond my grasp
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You know me and forms, today it is a Cascade.
In a Cascade a poet creates the initial stanza then takes each consecutive line from that first stanza and makes those the final lines of each stanza afterward. If the first stanza is sextet, then the complete poem will have seven stanzas. A tercet results in four stanzas and so on. Beyond that, there are no additional rules for rhyming, meter, etc.
The breaking of love…..:( How we all try to hold on to a fading love.
Thanks Crayfish.
I think you have done a good job with the poem, and with the form (not that I knew it, but I think the poems works well, so my best guess is, you are using the form to good advantage. 🙂
My Rally entry is at:
http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/fall-into-anticipation/
Thanks Elaine
wow…this is really good. And I really, really identify with it.
“But what hold have I a mere mortal against all eternity?”
…pure wisdom
Thank you Ohcgd.