13 comments on “The Between

  1. delicious rhyme scheme to this and great story telling as well as you roll out the various choices of life….really like the refrain as well and the changes you make to it…it is a slippery slope surely…smiles.

  2. The reality and deep perspective in this piece are very insightful. Super job conveying that to the reader through the contrast between both elements. I enjoyed reading this very much.

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