I felt you
A city with millions of people wedged between us
You touched me
A slow, easy gossamer susurrus
Eased from the back of my mind
And worked its way forward
Past the myriad of shopping list for groceries,
Home improvement projects and dry cleaning runs
Skipping over the reminder for the 1:30 meeting
And it was already 1:27
Through the jungle of facts, figures and techno babble
That will be my form the verbiage in a few moments
And took over the forefront of my mind,
My heart, my physical and emotional soul
And dropped them straight into the moments
Just before afterglow
And I inhale
Gone was the fluorescent office glare
The soft glow of candlelight
All that I can see
The white noise of voices
Replaced by the soothing sounds of bass sax heat
All that I can hear
And I exhale
Vanilla hazelnut coffee, transformed
Into the vanilla scented musk of incense
All that I can smell
And I inhale
The slow cool slip of air over my tongue
Past parted lips,
Bring back the sweetness of your breath
All that I can taste
In whole, a combination to
Arch my spine backwards
As I subconsciously thrust forward
To the feel of your fingers
All that I can touch
And I exhale
As fate, spite, karma, Murphy’s Law intervene
My phone rings just as
A co-worker steps up to my desk
My response to both a questioning “Yes?”
And I’m trapped at the verge
As you and he ask in stereo
“Are you coming?”
And I inhale
He for the meeting now a minute late
You for the dinner in a few hours hence
And somewhere in the echoes of silence
Between the flap of a hummingbird’s wing
The atom’s splitting
And my “Oh!” of surprise
I realize the answer to both question
And a third
That could just as easily
Be asked of myself
I close my eyes, grasping the phone
And the arm of my chair tighter
The inside of my cheek taking the punishment
Of my suppressed moan
As I answer all three yet one question
And I exhale
“Yes…”
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wow great capture of the moment…i was inhaling the moment that is still coming and finding peace in it from the day when that darn phone rang as well…ack…power on…the end is coming…that moment is coming….
Loved this! Fabulous write and wonderful sense about this piece–
now THIS is my kind of stuff here! Beautifully intoxicating! I love your simple and sweet descriptive’s, so soft and dreamy! nicely done!
Awesome write, Raivenne! Tense and vivid! Nice!
phone sex interruptus? susurrus under his breath…
Cheers,
Mark Butkus
loved your short sentences and the use of repetition! Thanks for the poetic moment.
I loved your sense of serenity and the mood change. Nicely done! You have a gift! Thanks for sharing! Happy Slicing! 🙂
Thank you all for your lovely and (in the case of Voyages…), humorous comments.
Oh, Miss Raivenne, another gem.
If that meeting was typical, I can certainly guess where your mind was throughout. Brain and “pinky” were one.
You captured more than my attention.