Honey, it’s a great day for a picnic!
Darling, yes, if you say so.
I can gather people real quick,
Honey, it’s a great day for a picnic,
I already have the food picked
But, I don’t really want to go
Honey, it’s a great day for a picnic!
Darling yes, if you say so.
Honey, ants are crawling on the table
Darling, can’t you just shoo them away
Well I would were I able
Honey, ants are crawling on the table
Just the thought makes me unstable
Lord, don’t let me say what I want to say
Honey, ants are crawling on the table
Darling, can’t you just shoo them away
Honey, when will the franks be done?
Darling, you’re starting to be a pain.
This one tastes a little undone
Honey, when will the franks be done?
Folks are waiting with their buns
Darling I think I just felt rain.
Honey, when will the franks be done?
Darling, you’re starting to be a pain.
Honey, everything is all wet!
Darling lets just go home now.
It’s even soaked all the briquettes,
Honey, everything is all wet!
This is the worst idea you’ve had yet!
To the moon, Darling! Bang! Zoom! Pow!
Honey, everything is all wet
Darling lets just go home NOW!
Honey? Who left all the food out there?
Darling, I have no idea.
It should be in the Frigidaire!
Honey? Who all left the food out there?
I have a thousand Tupperware,
It’s all going to spoil I fear!
Honey? Who all left the food out there?
Darling, I have no idea!
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ha…this was a lot of fun…and great story telling through the form and linking all the triolets….i like
Oh wow, very nice job tying all the triolets together. This almost sounds like you’ve been eavesdropping on one of my backyard BBQ’s!
Well done! I’m really happy with this one, the way you kept to the strict triolet form but linked the string of verses together into a full narrative.
This was great! And definitely how it goes. I like a walk in the woods, and then…a four star restaurant, s’il vouz plait. Picnics..how funny, perfect capture. And unbelievable how you sustained each triolet as a stanza. That should win a blue ribbon!
haha…this was a joy to read…just love your humor in this..great storytelling as well
My thanks to you all. The triolet is such a strict form, I wanted to see if I could have some fun with it. I’m happy you each enjoyed my ditzy domestic ditty. .
Hahaha- oh Honey, oh Darling, very funny.
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