8 comments on “Honey / Darling

  1. Well done! I’m really happy with this one, the way you kept to the strict triolet form but linked the string of verses together into a full narrative.

  2. This was great! And definitely how it goes. I like a walk in the woods, and then…a four star restaurant, s’il vouz plait. Picnics..how funny, perfect capture. And unbelievable how you sustained each triolet as a stanza. That should win a blue ribbon!

  3. My thanks to you all. The triolet is such a strict form, I wanted to see if I could have some fun with it. I’m happy you each enjoyed my ditzy domestic ditty. .

  4. I discovered your blog website on google and examine numerous of your early posts. Continue to preserve up the superb operate. I forward to reading much more from you later on!

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