7 comments on “The Best Days

  1. Excellent – love the way you set it up and took it out long and thrilling in each stanza and then added the refrain. Clearly you are happy with this form and it made me happy too! Really loved it!

  2. Great blues poem! I can hear it on a guitar so easily! You grabbed me with the first stanza about the bow legged, thick thighed lady who could drink men under the table. Great character!

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