11 comments on “The Rain

  1. This shape is inventive and harnesses the strength of the words it really works – love its relevant allusion….really enjoyed this poem

  2. Sometimes words just “drop” unto the page and take shape. This was one of them.

    * giggles * @ Coalbalck – I knew someone was going to hum that tune.;)

    Thanks to all, for your wonderful comments.

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