It started at one,
strong and sure
The promise of more
its lure
Birthday punches are a rite it’s true
But as they wore on, so did you
I took its weak finish
with a laughing smirk
Forgot I was 59
didn’t you, jerk?
dVerse ~ Poets Pub | Quadrille #160: Poems that Pack a Punch
Yesterday on Quadrille Monday, De Jackson, aka WhimsyGizmo, got a little punch drunk at the bar and invited us to punch out quadrille. Yesterday was my birthday. My bestfiend, not a misspell – who had the good sense to be born exactly a year later, and I were joking about the childhood silliness of delivering birthday wishes via punches on the arm. One punch-wish for each year, sometimes the token punches are delivered gently, sometimes not. Because I am blessed to age like fine wine, I do not look my years. Unless a boxer, I imagine most would begin to tire before reaching my current vintage and thus today’s silly quadrille.
Awww. Rhyming works so well for you here! If it’s autobiographical, Happy Birthday! 😉
Yes, Monday was my birthday. Thank you!
Happy Birthday! Sounds like your “bestfiend” got a few punches in!! 😆 Be blessed!! 💖
Thanks Tricia, not the best-fiend she knows better as she is only one year younger and I punch harder – lol. No, the ‘birthday wishes’ were from a different friend we ran into while out and about. He did not know my age when I told him ‘keep going I’ll tell you when to stop’. The punches had already downgraded to taps in the thirties. His face was priceless when I finally let him know he could stop.
😄 🥂
Haha. This poem made me smile. Nicely done and happy birthday.
Thank you!
Cheers🥂 Great fun! Hope you are not too bruised. 😁 Happy Birthday!
HAH! Thanks, I was fine. The person delivering the ‘birthday wishes’ semi-jokingly asked for an ace bandage when he was through. Even if I had bruised, it would have been worth for his expression at realizing I was nearly twenty wishes more that anticipated. 😁
He.. he… a punch delivered like that probably doesn’t hurt as much as it could… I have a few years more, but as they say, age is just a number…
Just a number indeed. Thanks Björn.