23 comments on “What It’s Not

  1. I liked this one a lot; negations aside, it’s the contrast of the assertions that give it depth and humanity. I loved the /oh so proud strut/ under those wide shoulders; brought back my own youth.

  2. It’s a lot of years since he’s gone, but I still miss the sound of his “sweet nothings”!

  3. I love this approach of what love is not, but which also because an enumeration of all the things that it is.

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