24 comments on “In The Silver Night

  1. Unrequited love is always painful, as echoed in your words.
    Nice! (Your words, not unrequited love!)
    Anna :o]

  2. Very much enjoyed the conversational tone of this poem – you made it work very well here, I think.. Your refrain of ‘In the silver night’ is also very effective here too… A real pleasure to read such carefully sculpted writing… Thank you

  3. Amazing write specially with these lines:

    It’s the eggshell syllables of your name
    I whisper to your specter in Luna’s light

    A treat to read tonight!!!!

  4. The repetition of “in the sliver night,” adds emphasis and gives the poem a song-like quality .. one that echoes in the corridors of one’s heart. Stunning write 💝💝

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