4 comments on “Respirator

  1. An inventive Quadrille that makes great use of sounds and verbs. I particularly like the lines:
    ‘Lulled shadow clouds melt,
    Leaving scars that dance, skip,
    Journey on breezes’

  2. Gorgeous!! I love; “Lulled shadow clouds melt, Leaving scars that dance, skip, Journey on breezes.”

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