22 comments on “Pulse

  1. A night of mourning and sadness. Pulses spill – is apt from what I am reading from the survivor’s first hand account of the tragedies.

  2. So many of us chose Orlando as the space we would poetically inhabit; yours is very strong, with empathy for the fallen & put upon; nice chilling job.

  3. Outcasts know and feel
    the value of love greater than those
    who resort to vengeance over Victory..
    Love SinGS a SonG
    oF WiN
    no matter
    whAT as Love
    Won SuNG
    LiVes aGaiN
    And agAiN.. eTc..:)

  4. From the title I knew the story you were going to tell, Raivenne, and how well you did with your powerfully chosen words that turn the joy of dancing to deadly assault in a quick moment’s time. Having that happen where I was born and grew up seems to make the pain for me all the more acute.

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