13 comments on “Dandelion Wishes

  1. That is some challenge to chain the words from one to the another ~ I like to fly like a dandelion on a summer night ~

  2. I love dandelions in their bright yellow form, and then the joy of blowing the parachutes.
    Anna :o]

  3. Love this! Will have to try a “chain poem” myself. I didn’t notice the last word “matching” the beginning of the poem but felt it intuitively — that circle round, that sense of complete — and then read that you’d done this. So the sense of the poem shines through rather than the form — and that’s a very good thing! 🙂 Enjoyed a lot!

  4. Very effective! Good form in this. But I do like the dandelions – I have an area of my lawn dedicated to them, white and red clover, and a few other weeds enjoyed by the butterflies and bees.

  5. This is beautiful. I love how you ended it with the word that started the chain, making it a full circle.

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