10 comments on “Making Room

  1. I read your poem over a few times. Quite a powerful message really…..indeed it does take time not to make room any longer for the one who has passed. It is subtle, isn’t it? A little bit at a time…year after year…and sometimes you don’t even realize it has happened….until you look back!

  2. This is a very powerful piece…we don’t realize what is “all wrong” until you tell us. The progression is a very gradual one and like you said subconscious until you have the realization that you’re not leaving as much space as you once had. Thank you for sharing such a personal experience, Ravienne. I always appreciate your writing; it’s nice to see you again at dVerse.
    Gayle ~

  3. It does take time to realize what it really means to be alone. I really love how you focused on that space, and I realize how my mother used to leave my father’s things… Wardrobes filled etc… And I do remember hoe long time it takes, the conclusion sounds reassuring though,

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