Within your hearts abode
a code
The slices of our past
can last
Simple joys to not perish
but cherish
Go on and reminisce
since
You hold the key
see?
There will be your smile
awhile
Within the territory
memory
glory
me
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Welcome to Echo Verse
An Echo Verse is a poem where the last word or syllable in a line is repeated or echoed underneath to form a rhyming line.
Remembrances can be bitter-sweet/joyful-sad, but you are right on as to the key; but, of course we ,can encounter memory triggers along the way. Nice choices for echoes.
Love your choice of echoes. Beautifully penned 🙂
Genetic memory Cold
Sold
Truth not often told
Bold
Present Force no form
Born..:)
I like how final line echoes back in triplicate…like a real echo (and memory) might!
fond memories truly are for cherishing and reliving…nicely echoed…
Beautiful memories…
You hold the key
see?
There will be your smile
awhile
I love this.
The reverb in those three lines… Like the fading echo. Love that innovation.
Well penned.
Memories are definitely two-edged. I like the innovation on the echo at the end.