Within your hearts abode a code The slices of our past can last Simple joys to not perish but cherish Go on and reminisce since You hold the key see? There will be your smile awhile Within the territory memory glory me
Welcome to Echo Verse
An Echo Verse is a poem where the last word or syllable in a line is repeated or echoed underneath to form a rhyming line.
Remembrances can be bitter-sweet/joyful-sad, but you are right on as to the key; but, of course we ,can encounter memory triggers along the way. Nice choices for echoes.
Love your choice of echoes. Beautifully penned 🙂
Genetic memory Cold
Truth not often told
Present Force no form
I like how final line echoes back in triplicate…like a real echo (and memory) might!
fond memories truly are for cherishing and reliving…nicely echoed…
You hold the key
There will be your smile
I love this.
The reverb in those three lines… Like the fading echo. Love that innovation.
Memories are definitely two-edged. I like the innovation on the echo at the end.