14 comments on “Play Me One More Song

  1. I admire the refrain: Brother, come and sing me one more song ~

    This is in contrast to the sadness of a coming death, with the load very heavy ~

    Thanks for joining us ~

  2. This is very poignant & moving. There are times when we hope we have that ‘one more song’ from someone who has known us for a long, long time.

  3. You did a sterling job of telling the story, rocking the prompt, & doing so within a form; always impressive when one of us stretches their poetic grasp & refines their talent; nice take, fine feel to it.

  4. Beautiful. I can see that being a final request…to have loved ones sing one final song as we fade from this life. Bjorn’s comment is spot on too…would make a great song in a bar.

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