the canvas laughs at me knowing
I hold the image of you,
sipping water from the fountain, in my head,
ready to transfer it from my memory to my canvas.
the cobalt and pthalo greens along with the terre verte
of the background foliage
the mixing of warm and cool grays for the fountain
were all easy choices
but now I’m down to you.
the canvas laughs at me knowing
ivory black, burnt umber and raw sienna?
for glossy dark locks of your hair,
the sweep of your brow, the curve of your lashes – yes.
oh, but where do I begin
for the deep rich tones that comprise all of your complexion?
burnt sienna might imbue the shadow in the curve of your dimples
maybe some yellow ochre deep to highlight your cheeks, hmm
the canvas laughs at me knowing
some titanium white to capture the hint of teeth showing as you smiled
won’t capture its mischievous gleam
but a touch of naples yellow light is perfect
in that the arc of the water drop reflecting sunlight
against the alizarin crimson
that is but one scant shade of the lushness of your lips
lips still wet from the water drank
not even seconds ago
an errant liquid drop is about to fall.
and the still unadorned canvas laughs at me knowing
there will never be a man-made hue,
that can rightly capture
the soul of you
I pick up my pallet anyway
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At dVerse Victoria challenges us Word Artists to Grab a Brush and Write! something related to art technique. The attached photo is from Andrew Wilmot a painter, award winning screen-writer, author and above all a person I am honored to consider a friend, is the inspiration for my write.
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Oh the effort of capturing a soul and life on canvas.. there never the right hues.. but still we have to try don’t we?
This is amazing. Makes me want to go drag out my paints. I often use the names of colors to express emotion when I’m writing prose. I just love what you did with this.
To see someone in that clarity is to love them, at least just a bit. Nice
Gorgeous coloring, especially in this line: “the cobalt and pthalo greens along with the terre verte” … I also really like the repeated line. I too feel like someone/something is always laughing at me, thinking that I might know anything at all.
It’s the shadows above a lip and below the eyes, the depth in a portrait painting tht is difficult to achieve…wonderful metaphor for life as art…a gift to be able to paint portraits well.
Beautiful colours of life and imagination blending together.
Love these lines . . .
there will never be a man-made hue,
that can rightly capture
the soul of you
This is such an accurate and lovely description of what it is like to capture the one we love in any artform:
“there will never be a man-made hue,
that can rightly capture
the soul of you”