10 comments on “I’ve Been Here Before

  1. I adore that first stanza with the colors and clouds.. and then that dive into a darkness that you seem to be familiar with.. there is an end coming out at the other end…. and then out in colors again.. a great ride though the night,,

  2. Very good – but not certain if I am seeing what I want to see. Read several times and not certain if the original blackness is depression or a bad trip and may be when you are the consumer (of the blackness) it is a good nights sleep?
    Anna :o]

    • Ah, Anna all three views are very possible. Sometimes the reader’s view coincides with mine, sometimes I the writer am lead to see a view through a very different lens. I think a reader sees what they need to see at the time. Thanks.

  3. when it consumed me and rgurgitated an empty shell back to the world….
    wow that encapsulates the feel well for me right there…and i like how you take both sides in this too…

  4. I read this and the other comments – the ambiguity in this is intriguing but certainly allows the reader to journey through his imagination for answers and perhaps that’s exactly as you planned it. Very interesting.

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