Two soldiers grieve after learning one of their brothers-at-arms has fallen.
Photo Credit: Kai Pfaffenbach for Reuters
…As the anger coursing through my veins
As I look across this beach foreign to me
As my guns carve the limit of my restraint’s lack
As I seize the day for another’s sovereignty
As my brothers at arms fight at my sides and back
…As the hunger crawling over my sin
When I think of the shade of certain someone’s hair
When I think prose of its owner quite a distances flight
When I think once again how life’s a tutor of the unfair
When I try not to think of her smooth skin that night
…As the crier of my resolution’s wane
On this sand far from my home’s grassy hills
On this life bewildered by what’s come to past
On this soil dyed crimson with this war’s kills
On this day bullets destined to be my last
…As the last prayer given beneath my skin
For the medic who sighs at what he sees
For the home I go to, just not where I used to play
For the glass like calm that washes over me
For the final trip now only two closed eyes away
…White… as the anger coursing through my veins
…White… as the hunger crawling over my sin
…White… as the crier of my resolution’s wane
…White… as the last prayer given beneath my skin
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I really love this one, Rai. Masterfully done.
whew…lot of emotion just under the surface in this one…i feel for those far from home right now…fighting the wars our leaders feel necessary…and for those that give their life for everyone else as well…really a moving piece…
I love how each lines starts with a preposititon that is repeated in each stanza.
just under the skin, yes this…
This is packed with raw emotions..it breaks my heart…”as the” day hopefully comes when we can all live as one…
Wow. You made repetition work for you, gave the message both grit and heart at the same time. Well done.
Very powerful and moving.
Goddamn. *speechless*