8 comments on “Psyche’s Lament

  1. Beautifully crafted. The repetitions kept changing inferences in each successive stanza and the overall effect was enchanting and musical. (BTW next FFA in two weeks …let me know if you’re still ok with that date.)

  2. smiles…i am looking forward to it as well…really nicely done…great hook lines and def like how you played them through out….that last stanza is killer…love the references in it too…

  3. Interesting interplay between your classical theme and the structure of the villanelle. Love the build-up until the two refrain lines are finaly together in the end.

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