12 comments on “Red Taloned Woman

  1. ah he should’ve listened to his friends…but there is that kind of sex that makes you throw all warnings in the wind..and when you wake up..it’s too late… sad story, fine story telling and written in an awesome flow…very nice..

  2. daaaaamn….. Loved this poem, Raivenne! Read like a true ballad … loved the repetition … awesome storyline … and I understand how he feels, real ting. Great job babe!

  3. really nice story telling in this…love how you break out the refrain as it gives weight and def easy to slip into something you never intended, but when you realise it, it is far too late….

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