My father is the earth
dark, deep, rich soil
soil tilled and turned
from the sunrise
to the sunset
sometimes in sweat
sometimes in blood
from the day born from it
to the day returned to it.
My father is the earth.
My father is the root
of the mahogany, the ebony, the oak
drinking heavily of
the sweet rain of the clouds
the salt rain of the tears
drenched deep in the soil
of my fathers before them
My father is the root.
My father is the trunk
rough on the outside
sometimes ripped by nature
sometimes stripped by man
but in the story of each ring
hidden deep inside
is the smooth beauty
known only by those
born of him
My father is the trunk.
My father is the limb
raised forward in the wind
raised forward in the rain
raised forward in the snow
raised forward to the sun
because you can’t teach
fathers to look forward
by having fathers
looking back
My father is the limb.
My father is the branch
the extensions of faith
the stretch of hope
the breadth of a promise
made long ago
My father is the branch.
I am the twig
the latest incarnation
of that promise deferred
planted deep of the earth
rooted of the past
trunked on to the present
out on a limb
branched to the sun
and if I seem to live
off my fathers before me
it is not to deprive
my fathers give willing
knowing I must survive
for it is their dreams
that are my dreams
coursing through my veins
and in that I am the twig
the branch
the limb
the trunk
the root
the earth
and in that I am my father.
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THIS is frankly magnificent, and to date my most favorite of everything you have written.
What?! “Whispers of a Muse” was knocked off its lofty perch? Wowsas! 😉
A beautiful poem. If I had discovered this poem, and didn’t know you had written it, I would have taken the author for an American Indian. It describes that “oneness with nature” in which they have always believed.
That “oneness” is shared through a lot of cultures. Thanks Bob.
An emotional attachment to our roots can bring back feelings of yearnings of love and appreciation of our surroundings. It sets one thinking of good tidings for humanity. Very incisive!
Stunning!!
This twig shows promise. Wonderful write. I did not imagine the scope when I began.
amazing…
excellent write.
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Happy Birthday from Morning/Riika, welcome sharing 1 to 3 random poems with us today.
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We miss your talent and hope to see your presence in our growing community this week.
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This is an awesome write, Raivenne! Loved it, start to finish.
breath taking,
love it.