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The Quilt

Posted on October 5, 2020 by Raivenne

Each square is story

Sentences in stiches

Pillow tucked paragraphs

Chapters of meandering memories

Lockstitch a life

My life

Started by one old hand

At my beginning

Passed through other hands

While I was busy

Finished with my old hand

To blanket my end

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Tonight at dVerse Merrill has the feel of autumn and wants to be blankest in a quadrille, a poem of 44 words, excluding the title. It can be in any form, rhymed or unrhymed, metered, or unmetered and must include some form of the prompt word – blanket.

dVerse Poets Pub | Quadrille #113: Blanket Us

dVerse Poets Pub graphic

30 thoughts on “The Quilt”

Tricia Sankey on October 5, 2020 at 5:57 PM said:

Good job! I love hand-made quilts. The images here are powerful!

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:52 AM said:
  
  Thank you, Tricia.
  
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sanaarizvi on October 5, 2020 at 6:24 PM said:

“Pillow tucked paragraphs,” is such an achingly beautiful image. There is so much that we experience throughout life. 💝

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:52 AM said:
  
  Thanks, Sanaa.
  
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Arcadia Maria on October 5, 2020 at 8:54 PM said:

Lovely poem with great imagery. I like the way you took us through the phases of life in this poem. Nicely done.

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:53 AM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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Dora on October 5, 2020 at 9:14 PM said:

A quilt of memories, begun long ago and entering into the future, framing a life: beautiful image!

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:53 AM said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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  - Dora on October 7, 2020 at 9:17 AM said:
    
    You’re so welcome.
kim881 on October 6, 2020 at 3:04 AM said:

I so enjoyed your quilt quadrille! I once slept under one my grandmother made from my mother’s childhood dresses. I love those square stories, ‘sentences in stitches’ and especially ‘pillow tucked paragraphs’. They put me in mind of How to Make an American Quilt by Whitney Otto.

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:56 AM said:
  
  How lovely, thanks Kim.
  
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Ingrid on October 6, 2020 at 6:04 AM said:

What a wonderful expression of life’s journey stitched into only 44 words!

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:57 AM said:
  
  Thanks Ingrid.
  
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merrildsmith on October 6, 2020 at 7:14 AM said:

Lovely imagery. I love the sound of “pillow tucked paragraphs.”
Life as a quilt, but also quilts made from life and memories, as Kim mentions.

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:58 AM said:
  
  Thank you, Merrildsmith, I meant it as both.
  
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Laura Bloomsbury on October 6, 2020 at 7:16 AM said:

Bravo! you sewed this together so well – creative and unique

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:58 AM said:
  
  Thanks Laura!
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on October 6, 2020 at 2:53 PM said:

I love the metaphor of life being a quilt… and in the end, we have our blanket to take with us in sleep.

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 8:59 AM said:
  
  Yes, that final rest. Thanks Björn.
  
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memadtwo on October 6, 2020 at 7:40 PM said:

I like the way you’ve stitched your words and images together. (K)

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 9:00 AM said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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Antoinette Arianna on October 7, 2020 at 8:03 PM said:

I love it. It blanketed me in warmth.

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- Raivenne on October 7, 2020 at 11:57 PM said:
  
  Thank you, Antoinette.
  
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msjadeli on October 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM said:

Quilts are special works of art constructed with love — and skill! Very nice tribute poem to them, Raivenne.

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- Raivenne on October 10, 2020 at 9:14 PM said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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  - msjadeli on October 11, 2020 at 12:40 PM said:
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
subversopus on October 10, 2020 at 4:47 PM said:

Awesome!!!

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- Raivenne on October 10, 2020 at 9:14 PM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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SaaniaSparkle 🧚🏻‍♀️ on October 11, 2020 at 10:39 AM said:

Nice blog!!

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- Raivenne on October 12, 2020 at 4:52 AM said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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