On Cue

Posted by Raivenne on March 27, 2017

Posted in: dVerse ~ Poets Pub, Poetry, Quadrille. Tagged: dVerse ~ Poets Pub, love, National Poetry Month, poetry forms, Quadrille. 7 Comments

Night scars gone
Jarred fireflies spark

We twist, skip, dance
In the bubbling spring
Ghost grins whisper and giggle

Breezes shimmer green
Leaves curl, spill in open journey

And In the lull
Dawn melts
In rose shadowed clouds

We breathe
Love balloons
On cue

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An added challenge by De for this Quadrille#29 prompt night at dVerse: Writing The One With All the Words used in Monday Quadrille challenges.

Our Q44 word list so far:

dance, lull, bubble, grin, melt, shimmer, twist, skip, green, breeze, spill, rose, journey, jar, leaves, open, shadow, cloud, spark, cue, breath(e), scar, curl, whisper, dawn, ghost, giggle, spring, balloon

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dVerse ~ Poets Pub | Quadrille #29-The One With All The Words

7 comments on “On Cue”

emangarduque on March 28, 2017 at 12:32 AM said:

this write light up beautifully like those fireflies.

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kaykuala h on March 28, 2017 at 4:26 AM said:

That’s quite an accomplishment to accept the challenge! Wonderful to have done so and so smoothly too!

Hank

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whimsygizmo on March 28, 2017 at 9:20 AM said:

I love those “rose shadowed clouds” especially. Love it when the ones with all the words yield a striking new phrase. You’ve done that here. Perfect.

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frankhubeny on March 28, 2017 at 9:23 AM said:

I liked breathing love balloons at the end.

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paul scribbles on March 28, 2017 at 12:41 PM said:

Welcome to the club :)…loved what you did with ‘all the words’ here, specially the ending.

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on March 28, 2017 at 1:48 PM said:

Yes – a day to love balloons… wonderful

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Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) on March 28, 2017 at 4:34 PM said:

My goodness this is good!❤️

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