5 comments on “The Iron Phoenix

  1. Ravienne – This is such a gorgeous image – you’ve captured both movement & stillness, darkness & light – both work so well to describe the metaphor of the train as a mythical bird of power & transformation (of which I’ve always loved, in fact, there is a phoenix in the novel I’m working on). 🙂 Thanks for participating & sharing.

  2. In shades unfathomable, to a world sealed in the night
    A fidget enthralled, I’m moved standing still

    Incredible lines!!

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