18 comments on “The Spirit Believes

  1. Am impressed with your use of form here & the fact that you have written such a meaningful lenten poem. I especially like ‘grand strides began with faith the size of a mustard seed.’ And I like the conclusion, mentioning the morning breath and at night a prayer before slumber.

  2. I like the way you wove multiple lines in. And I LOVE this:
    “Each morning’s new breath, my daily bread
    And a nightly prayer before my slumbers”

  3. You are indeed an over achiever, & I never thought of doing a glosa~ Enjoyed the weaving of the lines & I also specially admire that ending lines:

    Each morning’s new breath, my daily bread
    And a nightly prayer before my slumbers

  4. So many great lines and phrases in your amazing glosa but these words stood out for me…
    “Grand strides began with
    Faith the size of a mustard seed
    The spirit believes”
    Yes, the spirit always believes and has faith even though our egos may not. Well done, Raivenne!

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