I watch the moon so cold and pale
As to the dawn it starts to vale
Its glow reflecting in the dew
I can’t decide what plight is worst
In sun or moon should a heart burst?
As I recall the warmth of you
Your inner hue, not just your touch
‘Tis such and I miss it much
The deep rumbled “je t’adore”
When without fear your soul sprang free
And laid its care in none but me
And how it blessed me to my core
In these times sore I question so
To know that kind of love once more
At dVerse we asked to do a sonnet. I decided to give a go at one of the much lessen known Jeffreys Sonnet.
A Jeffreys Sonnet was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is isosyllabic (only 8 syllable per line), 2 sestets with a cross rhymed couplet (the cross rhyme is in the 2nd to 4th syllable in each of the two lines of the couplet). Also there is a cross rhyme in the first line of the 2nd sestet (between the 2nd to 4th syllable), tying the 1st sestet to the 2nd. So the rhyme scheme would be: aabccb, (b)ddeffe, (e)g (g)e. The letters in ( ) are the cross rhymes.
Ah,, very nice rhyme – scheme.. something to try some time.. and yes how the longing of someone missed can become such deep longing and almost physical pain… very well expressed-
to know that love once is to forever want it again
that is for sure…
That’s a sonnet form I’ve not come across before – and a lovely example of it too. Bravo!
I enjoyed your beat as I read it out aloud ~ I also like the theme of longing for that love, such a blessing to the core ~
a wonderful way of describing what love is…the yearning…..
Touched by a lover’s soul…………………………
Nice..will have to try that form soon 😉