Raivenne-lations

Doing what you like is freedom; liking what you do is happiness.

Posted on April 4, 2014 by Raivenne

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I offer unto you these hands

Their hold is strong, but never tight

I offer unto you these arms

To keep you close both day and night

I offer unto you this heart

The broken shards that you made whole

I offer unto you this grace

That you complete body and soul

And all I ask of you is this;

To answer ‘Yes’ with one sweet kiss

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National Poetry Month – 2014-4

Breaking the rules using a rhyming Sonnetina Uno while Meeting the Bar at dVerse.

Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on April 4, 2014 at 4:14 PM said:

Arms hands.. there is a solace in that.. and so little (or the world) in return.. a strong feeling of hope (maybe in vain) in that last line.

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claudia on April 4, 2014 at 4:53 PM said:

oh wow… she’s offering a lot… i hope that he says yes with all his heart…

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brian miller on April 4, 2014 at 5:32 PM said:

smiles…whole lot of willingness…in hope of love…this made me smile…

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billgncs on April 4, 2014 at 7:10 PM said:

I think that sounds like a great deal – there was a playfulness here that was fun

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charleenm on April 4, 2014 at 10:17 PM said:

I love this! I might have to recite this to someone I know…

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