Friday 55: What You Ask For…

Again, I awaken breathless.  Again, remembering nothing of the dreams that could cause such a state.  Last night I told myself -don’t think in the morning; say the first thing that comes to mind aloud, and I will remember.

So I did, and I did; but now I wish I hadn’t…

I dreamt of you.


Trying my hand at Flash Fiction, also called sudden fiction, micro fiction or nanofiction via Friday 55.
Write a story in exactly 55 words, then tell the G-Man!

9 thoughts on “Friday 55: What You Ask For…

  1. Raivene…
    What a PERFECT first time 55!
    I hope you found this prompt to be challenging, creative and FUN!
    Thank you for playing today, please join us again,
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End…Galen

  2. I’m gonna tell you something I’ve never told anyone else in the Bloggy-verse. There was this guy I dreamed of for years and I found myself wishing so much that he and I could meet and fall in love.
    When I found out more about him, I was so glad it didn’t happen. Talk about Mr. Wrong. Sometimes the Universe knows best.

  3. I think this is solid writing. You pinned both narrative and emotional content in just 55 words. Well done.

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