9 comments on “Long Fallen

  1. wow…what a story you got out of autumncant imagine that being an easy job no matter how much you enjoy the sex…i like too the ref to sun tzu and the art of war…smiles.

  2. That’s epic not just seasonal! Sensational details, and through the poem a sense of erosion without hope of reverse – of hopelessness where glamour became a currency, and counterfeit was trade. A truly amazing piece.

  3. Raivenne, I was captivated by your autumn tale. You worked details well, as you brought your character to live, and gave us a compelling story of a difficult autumn. A wonderfuul write, for whatever season.

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